Really good, suggestions
This was a very well done peice, I liked your selection of instruments and the general progression of the melody throughout. A couple points of notice though (take them or leave them just my opinion) the timpani could have been a bit louder in certine areas and I would have liked a bit of a stronger bass feeling with them as well. Other than that I think that it is indeed vision conjureing and quite profound.
Your points are taken, i always follow suggestions, as long as they could be followed.
I just wish you could have told me exactly where you wanted the timpani to be louder :(
Thank you for reviewing, this is a really well written one :), just hoped you could give me some more examples :(
So my opinion is that you should always think about your own thoughts so when the time comes to explain something you can accurately tell them your explanation to something regardless of whether or not you know anything about the topic in question.
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Mental Institution
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
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